Not only does my writing hate me, but so does LJ....

[failegaidin]

Okay, so lately, every sentence that I try to write feels painfully awkward when I go back over and read it. This, of course, is not going to stop me from trying to write (at least, I hope not). I'm just going to keep writing these damn drabbles until my brain decides to function again.

This one was for "Kiss." Thanks to roryliefor the bunny. 

            Chloe was surprised to find that she had just as many customers at the kissing booth as Nadia did. When the younger woman had first asked her, Chloe had done everything she could think of to get out of it. But it was for a good cause, and Nadia was a very persistent nagger. And although she hated to admit it to herself, she was really enjoying herself.

            She turned to watch Nadia for a moment, doing a double-take when she saw her tongue wrestling with Milo. Smirking at them, she loudly cleared her throat, forcing them to finally pull apart.

            "You're not going to raise much money if you keep making out with your boyfriend, Nadia."

            "You guys are closing in ten minutes," Milo argued.

            At Chloe's continued raised eyebrow, Nadia giggled. "Don't worry, Chloe. Milo's paying for all ten minutes." She pointed to the cash on the counter that Milo had set down.

            Chloe rolled her eyes and smiled at them as they resumed their kissing. Thinking that she would duck out a little early, she was stopped by an all too familiar voice.

            "I'd like to book your last ten minutes."

            She turned her head to find herself staring at Jack Bauer. He laid the money down on the counter giving her a grin that sent shivers down her spine. Swallowing nervously, she shot him back with a seductive smile.

            "You sure you can handle that?"

            That made him outright laugh. "Well," he said, his voice low as his face neared hers. "I'd sure as hell like to try."

            He kissed her softly at first, his mouth moving slowly over hers. Reaching over the counter he took her face in his hands, tilting his head and nudging her lips open with the tip of his tongue. As her senses went into overload, Chloe moaned softly into his mouth, letting his tongue tangle with hers while his hands locked in her hair.  She went to quicken their pace, but Jack tightened his grip on her and forced her to slow down again as he took his time exploring her mouth. The world around her forgotten, Chloe gripped the front of his shirt, her brain frantically trying to keep her body from jumping over the counter and into his arms.

            When he finally pulled back, both were breathing heavily. Jack leaned his forehead against hers, his eyes still closed and his hands still in her hair.

            "I'd like to take you home," he whispered, finally looking at her, a small nervous smile on his face.

            Chloe nodded before turning her head. "Nadia-" she cut off as she saw that both Nadia and Milo were staring at her and Jack with gaping mouths. Scowling, she rolled her eyes at them. "Oh, grow up, you two. Nadia, can you close up here?"

            The other woman nodded slowly. "Sure…you two…have fun."

            "Oh we will," Chloe smirked as she hopped up on the counter and swung her legs over, Jack helping her down. With a little wave, she let herself be led away by Jack.

Comments

[sej-1986.livejournal.com]

*hugs* I read the disclaimer and I know the feeling all too well, it does pass though :) And this was yet another cute drabble, which I loved :D

[rorylie.livejournal.com]

I just love this. You made them so very, very hot.

[willow-fae-20.livejournal.com]

Loved this, it was hot and perfect.

[jessie611.livejournal.com]

Brilliant! Love it. :D

[glorylinnemann.livejournal.com]

LOL. That line about Milo & Nadia with their mouths agape totally made me giggle. Loudly. Because I can so see them in my head.

Anyway, this is such a cute (and hot) little drabble. I love it. I knew you'd make it completely adorable. *bows* :D