failegaidin: (chlack hug day 5)
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Umm...So I wrote this uber-short drabble in an effort to bribe [profile] glorylinnemann. Set one year after S6. 


    The sound of her front door opening and slamming shut caused Chloe to jump, and sudden fear gripped her heart. She tried to control her breathing, telling herself that it was the middle of the afternoon and a thief or rapist wouldn't just waltz in through her front door. Picking up a pan from the stove, she inched out of her kitchen, only to stop dead in her tracks in the hallway.
    Jack was standing directly across from her, his gaze intense and his breathing labored. He stared at her for a moment, his eyes roaming up and down her body as he took her in. He had left one year ago, and the very sight of her made his knees week.
    Chloe's mouth opened as she tried to speak, tried to say anything to the man standing before her. She had cried when he left, certain that this time he wouldn't be coming back, not after everything that had happened with his father and Audrey. But there he was, standing in her house, looking at her as though she were his lifeline.
    In a few quick strides, he came to her without a word. He took her face in both his hands and brought his lips crashing down to hers, pulling her up against him. His tongue plunged into her mouth, tasting her as his hands moved down her body until they were wrapped around her waist and holding her close. Chloe kissed him back with equal fervor, her mind clouded with the feel of him, but her body taking over and responding to his touch. One hand clamped in his hair while the other had the front of his shirt in a vice-like grip.
    Finally Jack pulled back, knowing that they both needed to breathe. Lacing his fingers through her hair and holding her head steady, he forced her to look at him.
    "I don't work without you," he growled.
    Chloe found her voice. "Then don't be without me."
    Nodding as though he hadn't thought of that before, Jack released his grip on her and took her gently by the hand, leading her upstairs.

Date: 2007-06-01 04:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparky-girl82.livejournal.com
"I don't work without you," he growled.
Chloe found her voice. "Then don't be without me."


Has to be one of the best lines I"ve ever heard....ever! See this I could stand seeing in S7, put all the Awwwwdrey crap behind us. Great job Lisa...loved it!

Date: 2007-06-01 11:09 pm (UTC)
ext_40947: (jack chloe hug frame)
From: [identity profile] failegaidin.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm glad you liked it. I was quite fond of that line too. And once Jack realizes the validity of that statement....

Date: 2007-06-01 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheabear.livejournal.com
I agree with Holly. This was awesome! :)

Date: 2007-06-01 11:10 pm (UTC)
ext_40947: (chlack look day 6)
From: [identity profile] failegaidin.livejournal.com
Oh thank you!

Date: 2007-06-01 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rorylie.livejournal.com
That's lovely.

Date: 2007-06-01 11:11 pm (UTC)
ext_40947: (chlack smile phone)
From: [identity profile] failegaidin.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

Date: 2007-06-01 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phonesexbetty.livejournal.com
LOVE IT! Would like more please... ;)

Love your new page look btw

Date: 2007-06-01 11:12 pm (UTC)
ext_40947: (24 LOST)
From: [identity profile] failegaidin.livejournal.com
Sorry, that's all I have for this story...but there will be more Chlack coming, I promise...as soon as my word bunnies return and let me finish the stupid Restaurant prompt...

And I'm glad you like the new layout. I squealed in joy when I saw it...credit for it is in my profile, because I certainly couldn't make anything this beautiful.

Date: 2007-06-01 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] willow-fae-20.livejournal.com
Yay. this was yummy. I love when my email tells me there is a new entry from you, it makes my heart happy.

Date: 2007-06-01 11:13 pm (UTC)
ext_40947: (chase jack hot)
From: [identity profile] failegaidin.livejournal.com
Oh wow. You have no idea what that means to me. I'm glad you enjoy my stories so much. I aim to please ;)

Date: 2007-06-02 10:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glorylinnemann.livejournal.com
Allow me to reiterate the complete & utter AWESOMENESS of that line. I can just hear him saying it in my head...and it makes me feel all happy and fuzzy inside. Seriously, it might be my favorite line from a Chlack fic ever. And from a bribe! I need to procrastinate more often if lines like these are the result. (No, I don't.)

Once again...LOVE IT. :D

Date: 2007-06-03 03:55 pm (UTC)
ext_40947: (take what you need)
From: [identity profile] failegaidin.livejournal.com
You'd better not keep procrastinating!!!! You're killing me here. But I'm glad you liked this, especially since I wrote it in about 7 minutes flat :)

Date: 2007-06-02 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessie611.livejournal.com
It took him a year to figure it out but it was worth it. Loved it. :D

Date: 2007-06-03 03:56 pm (UTC)
ext_40947: (assad and jack fight crime)
From: [identity profile] failegaidin.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2007-06-02 07:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sej-1986.livejournal.com
I know I am a teensy bit late in responding to this... but wow! I love it! Short but very incredibly sweet <3

May I also add that I love your "Lost" icon and your banner <3

Date: 2007-06-03 03:58 pm (UTC)
ext_40947: (24 LOST)
From: [identity profile] failegaidin.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it!

My banner is my new favoritest thing. lady_boromir was nice enough to get it for me and make my colors and layout and stuff. Makes me so happy every time I come to my journal.

And Jack Bauer on LOST? Greatest fic idea ever :)

Date: 2007-06-03 08:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scoob2222.livejournal.com
That is a great line

Date: 2007-06-03 03:58 pm (UTC)
ext_40947: (my wish)
From: [identity profile] failegaidin.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

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