Date: 2007-03-12 11:32 pm (UTC)
"Do you see this?" Chloe yelled, gesturing at her barely-clad body. Jack fervently wished she wouldn't do that, seeing as how he was already having trouble focusing on anything BUT her body. "Does this look like something I would wear?"

I loved this line. It is just so like Chloe to be completely insecure and ignorant to her charm then drawing his attention to it even more. Fantastic chapter, keep going. :)
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