ext_206817 ([identity profile] sleepysandy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] failegaidin 2007-04-20 02:54 am (UTC)

Another fantastic chapter. You must really feel wanted huh? LOL.
Poor Chloe, but her Super Jack is coming to rescue her.
I loved this part :

Curtis nodded, extending his hand. Jack looked at it for a moment before taking it, and the two friends shook hands. Without another word, Jack slipped down to the docks.

Without a doubt, this just shows how upstanding Curtis is and a friend to Jack. I love their bond of friendship. It tells a lot about the both of them in that little moment. They rely and need that support from each other, and it's like a little glimpse into the respect they hold for each other too.

I cannot wait for another chapter! Thanks for letting those plot bunnies out LOL, and to sparkygirl too. =) What kind of demands are you making to get these out so quickly LOL?

~Sandra~

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