I am SO glad you finished chapter one! Good for you. I love it, of course, and I hereby NAG you for chapter 2 of this huge, scary, mini-, nay,full length, novel. It's inspiring to see such originality in a 24 fic, and I can't wait to see how it all plays out. It might take a year to get there, but I shall be nagging and bugging and bribing you the whole way (assuming this craptop doesn't permanentlu crap out).

I am absolutely DYING to see how Ava & Tony interact. It's unhealthy how much I am dying to see it. Seriously.

Anyway, YAY for chapter one, love the title, I love all of the character interaction (spot-on, BTW), and I am now off to nag thee for MORE. Love, love, love it! ;)